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When Nora is willed a beautiful house on a bluff, and a musty old curio shop from a distant relation, She thought it would be great way to start over after her divorce.
While cleaning the store room, a carpet unrolls and a very naked and sexy man pops out offering her a month of sultry passion... and three wishes. Customer Reviews:
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Overall Enjoyment: 1
The grammar in this story is so horrific that I couldn't get more than four pages into it. "Your" v "You're" for example. I couldn't tell another reader if the story itself was any good or not - I couldn't be bothered to read something that the authors didn't care enough about to even proofread.
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Overall Enjoyment:
Terrible. I was interested in the premise -- but the author(s) ruined it by having the 'genie' speak in slang and use phrasing that was completely incongruous with the character. The grammar was atrocious...errors that a basic grammar check on Word would fix. The characters and the sex where uninteresting.
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