The Donor

This story can definitely be expanded or made into a Part 2. That would be wonderful to read. Interesting storyline, I liked it! Sex scene was a bit short and ended in a way that you were longing for more. Great writing!

It was way to good to e way too short. Would like more,more, more. very good read!

This was a short (roughly 17 pages), hot read. I would have loved some sort of epilogue to see what happened to the two of them. Did she get her wish? Did he get his? The not knowing drives me nuts :(

This wasn't a bad read despite its length and the set up was believable.

not my type of interracial read the author didn't go into detail as far as heroine. anyway so over this book.

Short read, hot read, great read.....enough said!

Short story, but readable. One of my favorite short stories, because when it ends I didn't get the feeling that it should have been longer.

I get this is a free read, and yeah it cought my attention, but I still felt...wanting. Just as I was starting to go..,it ended. The plot was so-on-point-but,she could have taken this thought, to an all time high if is was explored a little more.

exciting and hot naughty read would have been great if a little longer