eBook Details

Bittersweet

By: Steve Berman | Other books by Steve Berman
Published By: Lethe Press
Published: Aug 01, 2007
ISBN # LetheStory6
Word Count: 2,500
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Price: $0.00

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Categories: Gay Free Reads

Description
Love can sometimes be sweet, sometimes bitter. High schooler Daulton is about to discover these truths. His boyfriend, Jerrod, is diabetic and may be in real danger if an upcoming surgery fails to heal him. And like everything sweet, with boys there's temptation...

This modern fairy tale of young love--a finalist for the 2008 Gaylactic Spectrum Award for Best Short Story--is included in Steve Berman's story collection SECOND THOUGHTS (also available through AllRomanceEbooks).
 
Reader Rating:  starstarstar (52 Ratings)
Sensuality Rating:   lipliplip
 
Editorial Reviews:
From Reading in the Dark
I was really struck by "Bittersweet"... I found the image of the gingerbread boy, which combines the desires of wanting to be wanted but also wanting to run away form that desire, with all its implications for being consumed by another, to be, well, bittersweet, and I like the fact that the protagonist does not find any easy answers...
Excerpt:
The boys ordered the greatest hot drink ever meant for a glass: Vietnamese coffee. The base of ivory condensed milk. Th e top of so–brown–it’s–black chicory coffee. The boys marveled at the dichotomy.

Only one coffee shop in Philly offered their favorite. Posters and flyers covered nearly every wall. The latest single from the Red Caps, a remix of Hungry Like the Wolf, way overplayed, hung in the air.

Dault watched Jerrod tip his glass, the lip pale from steam. Doughy and pale, Jerrod didn’t like to break margins. He must have been the first kid to color within the lines. The sort that regretted spooning peanut butter from the jar first.

“Would you date a gingerbread man?” Dault asked. The distraction afforded him the chance to plunge a spoon into his own glass and stir.

“Being diabetic…” Jerrod’s forehead creased, making him doubly serious. “I have you anyways.”

Dault drank for several seconds to earn a murky mustache. Anything to make his boyfriend grin. It worked. “Someone made a cartoon of the fairy tale. Posted it on YouTube.” He wiped his lips clean with the back of his hand.

“That the one with a wolf?”

“Was a fox, not a wolf. Drink your coffee. Would you rather date a wolf or a gingerbread man?” Dault had often wondered what kissing a wolf would be like. Wolves kiss first and ask permission later. Or maybe never even ask permission.

“Are you dumping me so I can date make-believe people?”

Reader Reviews (2)
Submitted By: jemirah on Sep 27, 2009
This was a very well written short story--so well written that it ended way too soon. I wanted depth and detail and plot to go with the gorgeous and witty style.
Submitted By: kathyk_713 on Aug 31, 2009
Short, somewhat sweet with a taste of different thrown in; this story followed no rhyme or reason that I could figure, but I liked it. Teenage angst & romance... with a twist.
 

Bittersweet

By: Steve Berman

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